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Emil's picture
27 pencils

TR1 - Episde 4.1

Another attempt to create a logo for TR1.

TR1 for non-accompanying is a company that creates web pages and are willing to change the logo, you can see the actual logo here www.tr1.com.br

The first made a distinct change. Nothing more than a "T" forming a belt, or rather, a funnel, which represents a "translator" of customer information to binary information of the computers that is what the company does.

But the other, I made some changes about the crucifix and increased the negative spaces on top, and I changed the font, choose the future bkbt, simpler and thick, as qwertyale and import60 commented.

What do you think now?

Thanks guys, you really help me in this job.

Leaky Penny's picture
1694 pencils

I like the uterus on #1.

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monkey1979's picture
457 pencils

haha, open legs and crucifixes, reminds me of the Exorcist.

living on dreams and custard creams.

qwertyale's picture
788 pencils

Hi Emil,

bicho esquece esse crucufixo pelo amor de deus... xD
(for god forget this crucifix!)

I don't understand why you are mesmerized by this crucifix...
is this a portuguese (Portugal) company to use crucifix? you know it's not the "t" letter anymore...

these fonts are still the worst you could choose for a web company.
french TF1 channel could use this typo at 50's...

Ronaldo! xD

wgzn's picture
195 pencils

you were better 3 versions ago.

import60's picture
60 pencils

It is disjointed, falling apart. The letter (font) still does not work. Why the cross? This version is less dynamic then the version before. I suggest break away from this idea.
Try doing some concept work and brainstorming and start a new direction.

ranamaju's picture
127 pencils

I told you on earlier post its inside. But as you didn't find it here is an example...

ranamaju
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Emil's picture
27 pencils

thanks, i´ll work on it .. i´m very unhappy with my development with this job.

ranamaju's picture
127 pencils

you are welcome. I will be happy if I can see the end product.

ranamaju
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www.eyedealab.com

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