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chanroo's picture
35 pencils

Logo for a roofing expert

I did the logo for one of my client, they are roofing expert. pls comment on this.

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qwertyale's picture
372 pencils

disaster

chanroo's picture
35 pencils

i cant able to understand ur critique. pls give me some suggestions

qwertyale's picture
372 pencils

I think that sometimes we can start from the ending, from the synthesis and build a stronger cooperative reverse engineering to analyse all the mistakes together.

I made something like the soccer short first shoot =D because I trust on each one cooperative participation as a good team or a cool jam session. =D

monkey1979's picture
280 pencils

where ever you have tried to incorporate the 'roof' you have destroyed the typography.

1) reads Slylo RooFing, the F is hideously out of sync with the rest of the text, and what's going on with the T?

2) That type is just plain ugly and the shape looks like a storage facility.

3) Probably has the most promise, but it's still not great, extremely generic.

4) That F again, it's horrible

5) Reads 'Stilo Rooting' I can see what you were trying, but this doesn't work, you are forcing it too much.

Get a pad and a pencil and try to make it work before launching into Illustrator or whatever you have done this in.

3dogmama's picture
1825 pencils

Agree with above comments. My initial reaction was suspension bridging and not working at all.

I noticed that you explored the pointed characteristic of "STYLO" on #1, but not to the point where it works. However, I'd head down that road as "STYLO" is less generic than 'roofing'.

"The true meaning of life is to plant trees, under whose shade you do not expect to sit."

-Nelson Henderson

Leaky Penny's picture
1482 pencils

Start over. Burn these.

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We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

import60's picture
27 pencils

It is so wrong. The typography is weak. The intergration of a roof is forced.
I think I know what you are trying to do. Try placing the name above each other.
Keep it simple. Start all over again.

Art D. Rector's picture
717 pencils

This is one idea fleshed out in 5 different ways. Decide which one of these is your favorite then come up with a couple totally different ideas to go with it.

VAiN's picture
6 pencils

Start by stacking the words... try a totally different approach...

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