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kvidera100033971's picture
19 pencils

kinder kids day care center

this kinder kids piece would be for a day care center

Leaky Penny's picture
1665 pencils

That hand seems lost in the type. Maybe reversing the colours? On the subject of colours, I'd use something less pastel and more vibrant.

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We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

Scrawny.Nelson's picture
24 pencils

The rectangle is superfluous and obstructs a clean impression of the hand print.

Art D. Rector's picture
1035 pencils

+1, +1...

The hand, rectangle, K thing is just too busy and compacted. Work that out.

wgzn's picture
171 pencils

been done about 20,000 times before.

qwertyale's picture
765 pencils

I think you are on right direction... targeting low budget stuff... to feel free for reproduce their brand without expenses.

the suggestion is create some unique detail that could be reproduce as you intend.

Ronaldo! xD

3dogmama's picture
1959 pencils

Work through some more sketches. I don't feel you're 'there' yet.

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

monkey1979's picture
445 pencils

nope.

the handprint is nice. work with that, enlarge it massively.

Use a clean typeface, the paint splat hand-print is enough.

the 'k' is in a cage. why?

living on dreams and custard creams.

Leaky Penny's picture
1665 pencils

"the 'k' is in a cage. why?"

Where do you think they put the kids?

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

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