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REBA's picture
11 pencils

Festi

Studio Sesti
www.studiofesti.it
i's a company that produce open-air shows.
Those are based on a baroque concept of Festa, but they mix
fireworks and projection and areal and mass dance....
tradition and innovation.

Comments please.

I'm the company set designer... not a pro!

AtomicArt1's picture
12 pencils

Hey there.

It's a good start. I like the fonts. But the "S" needs to be redone. It's not a very smooth shape. It needs to flow more. Try starting with an existing "S" maybe then use your pen tool to shape it from there. I would also probably bring the end of the S to a point like you did at the top. It just sort of ends without any effect.

Also I'm not to crazy about the gradient in the S. A solid color or graphic might look better inside of it...

I like where you're going though. Just needs some fine-tuning.

gwells's picture
1542 pencils

it almost looks like you're trying to make the S into a clef mark, but not quite succeeding.

agreed that the gradient is weak and should probably be left out (along with the lens flare, please).

REBA's picture
11 pencils

Yes.. In the beginning the S was more like the violin ff . I will work on it

REBA's picture
11 pencils

Is it bed to put font with serif together san seris? I like it

wgzn's picture
193 pencils

i need to see it in all black to really buy the mark.

curiousthingks's picture
28 pencils

Beside that please concern that the words "studio" and the tagline both are too small, especially the tagline, its too thin and small, also it is crossing the S, find another placement.

will work for fun :))

Leaky Penny's picture
1690 pencils

Il fin, la meraviglie should NOT be in a white rectangle...what the heck!

Fireworks and projection and areal and mass dance sounds dynamic and exciting!

Too bad this logo doesn't reflect that.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

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REBA's picture
11 pencils

Yes thank you, but the idea was to reflect more the italian tradition style, with a touch of modern

REBA's picture
11 pencils

Yes thank you, but the idea was to reflect more the italian tradition style, with a touch of modern

REBA's picture
11 pencils

Two company, one is based on south america , the gold one in Europe

Art D. Rector's picture
1058 pencils

The bottom one has potential imho. I'd like to see the S smoother still - it's a little lumpy, especially around the lower right. The tips of the S should have the same tips as the t. Then lower the S down some - it should be sitting lower in the logo.

Delete the tag line.

REBA's picture
11 pencils

Thank you!
But the tag line I really won't to delite is a must for the company board...
Probaby if I leave even more space?

AtomicArt1's picture
12 pencils

That's come a long way! I really like the top one best. I like how the "Studio" sits atop the "F".
Nice work.

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