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tolimm's picture
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Chicken Package Design

I need feedback for new Product "MISS CHICKEN" Chicken Package. Need your suggestions.

Thanks in Advance.

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www.jackmancer.com's picture
532 pencils

hmmm, chicken :D

I prefer bottem right. Definetly not top left, that's like a stop sign :D

Anders's picture
412 pencils

Number 1 says: "DON'T EAT"
Number 2: Wtf.
Number 3: Mediocre logo compared to 4
Number 4: My favorite, although I would reconsider the use of the yellow part. Makes it look dated.

qwertyale's picture
2047 pencils

"DON'T EAT" was great xD
I loved the #1 logo and think the naming is weird =D

yes I'm brazilian xD

monkey1979's picture
680 pencils

raw chicken looks awful, could you not use a picture of some crispy, spit cooked, juicy chicken? Or is that a window showing the product?

#3 has the best chicken character, but it looks more like a rooster than a hen to me, the product is called 'Miss Chicken'

#4 has the most interesting shape to the lozenge / warped oval, but it still looks quite disjointed.

'100% natural' is not conveyed very well by the colour pallette you have selected. Bright reds, yellows and greens hardly shout 'natural', choose more earthy tones.

What is a natural chicken anyway? Like a non robotic chicken? Is it organic, free-range or caged?

"Natural 100% Fresh" = Still Alive....

living on dreams and custard creams.

tolimm's picture
6 pencils

Thank you so much everybody for your critiques

@monkey1979 oval shape is tranpsparent window

natobasso's picture
3951 pencils

The text isn't large enough on any of the packages. Do some research on the web and you'll find some good inspiration:

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