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NRcreative's picture
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air

Hi again guys, i have had so many great ideas and comments that i have anotherone that i would love for you to comment on

this is for one of my friends that just started to freelance and is her personal logo , the name is air and stands for Art, Image and Resolution

thanks for the comments beforehand!

Leaky Penny's picture
1673 pencils

Boring. Generic. Without concept.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

wgzn's picture
180 pencils

and REALLY BAD kerning problems. i read A IR

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

yeah i know, but i am just trying to get enough feedback from pro's with experience maybe that way she will beleive me hahahaha

Leaky Penny's picture
1673 pencils

So let me get this straight. She's a designer yet she asks you to design her logo and you have no idea how to, so you're just throwing out ideas until one of us says "It's great!" then "get enough feedback from pro's with experience maybe that way she will believe me hahahaha" ?

Are you an actual designer?

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

yeah i know, but i am just trying to get enough feedback from pro's with experience maybe that way she will beleive me hahahaha

monkey1979's picture
449 pencils

I think your friend should have a go at designing her own logo, because this is just terrible.

• Kerning problems
• Awkward positioning and proportions
• Lack of concept
• Broken colour scheme. If you were going for CMYK stick with CMYK.

This is a general "Ooh I've got a graphics package, I can be a designer!! YAY!!" kind of a logo.

living on dreams and custard creams.

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

hahahaha , you are right man! and to reply to leaky, i am studying to be a design pro like most of you guys, those that show the spirit of a pro, thanks for all your comments i know you are not forced to post anything so i really appreciate all comments.

you know that school gives you the basics and then you learn from experienced people, well untill i get a job at a place with experienced people i hope i can use this site to learn from you guys.

monkey1979's picture
449 pencils

Keep learning, look at other logos (Lots of books & tons of website) and if you've got the knack, it will all click into place.

But you are right, working under talented individuals will give you more knowledge than any university/college/book/website can teach.

Without studying university/college/books/websites you don't stand much chance of getting your foot in the door of an agency though.

So stop pissing around on here and get studying.

living on dreams and custard creams.

Art D. Rector's picture
1046 pencils

A designer should at least be capable of designing their own logo. Come on. And using cmyk is not a good idea - one of the first rules you learn when you paint is don't use the color straight out of the tube - you should be mixing your OWN colors. Same with design - you should have a knowledge of color beyond the ones that are used in the printing process and be able to use them accordingly. Printers use cmyk in their logos because they're not designers - they're tree surgeons who happen to own a printing press.

Beyond what everyone else said (all good advice) - that leaf thing on the right is being crushed by the name. Not that it matters because this thing is a total reboot anyway. But now you have a little direction for next time around.

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

well i really appreciate all the comments myself but this is not my logo, but shure i can use all the advice. i hope you guys dont feel like i am bugging on the site, i will just stay silent and learn from your ideas on other people's work.

Leaky Penny's picture
1673 pencils

Wait, this wasn't even *your* logo?

Ridiculous.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

qwertyale's picture
775 pencils

no.

Ronaldo! xD

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

yes you are right sorry i wrote for but i meant from sorry, writing in a hurry

NRcreative's picture
17 pencils

yes you are right sorry i wrote for but i meant from sorry, writing in a hurry but dont worry she will get the message

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