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dsauna's picture
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oops

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Sorry forgot to put a background on the other one

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jHouse's picture
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I think the idea is good - but it needs more development. Keep tweaking it, or leave it and try another idea and come back to it - that usually helps!

I can see this turning out quite good!

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dsauna's picture
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Thanks! Yeah I think that's a good idea

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gwells's picture
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logomark is great. i wonder what might happen if you made the top of the "T" look like an open book, so you get both the book and the headphones. almost like a book on a pedestal. dunno if you can pull that off an still have the headphones.

the relationship between tempest and audiobooks is very awkward in both. the descender of the "p" is killing it. i think you need to do some more type studies on the text portion.

dsauna's picture
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Thank you, I'll take that into consideration.

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