NATESAN MOHAN / LIFELINE HOSPITAL
natesanmohan (76 points) | Mon, 2009-06-29 10:28
Combat life's challenges with your good health.
This ad is created for special supplement on Economical Crises.
NATESAN MOHAN
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the copy needing to be bigger...that guy is a little creepy. I don't get the beach either. is the beach a challenge?
Leaky Penny
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When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy
Hi, Thank you for your comment.
About the font size, this is an half page ad in the news paper in that readability is very clear. About the other question, as you said yes "challenge" is the answer. (In the beach you may get tsunami also)
NATESAN MOHAN
There's a giant head growing out of the beach!
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Yes, you are correct.
NATESAN MOHAN
Shes correct there's a head growing out of the beach!?
HAHA
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lol
I knew it! :D
honestly, it says more "church" to me than hospital. maybe it's the way the guy is looking up to the heavens, maybe it's the type of beach scene, dunno. but i don't think this evokes the feeling you're going for.
Hi, Thank you for your comment.
NATESAN MOHAN
Hi, thank you for your comment.
"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano
...at least it wasn't thank you come again. I know, I know, they have a spot reserved for me in Hell.
Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com
When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy
There should be a body floating in the tide...
and the quote should say "almost dead? we can help."
"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano
Are one of the most awesome people on the internet.
Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com
When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy