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Version 2 of the fundraiser poster.
Please let me know what you think. Thanks for the input...

Working on a poster to help raise money for a stunt rider who crashed hard. I want to give a good product... Please let me know what you think.

First time on the site, it's nice to have a sounding board again

My wife has a hair bow company. This is her favorite. The Palmetto tree is our state tree here in South Carolina. It's kind of a big deal. I can throw a different bow in there. I did it in CMYK colors, which I am not to fond of. Do I have to use that for business cards?

This site is going to be made for a school project. This is just a scratch. We are from Norway so we apologies for the norwegian text.

graphic/webdesign firm by the way.

And the header is not ours we will make our own before we go live.

The idea is for a social networking website or blog where everybody shares there opinions, knowledge etc. I used quote to represent number 9. Number 9 is taken because it is largest number denoting the maximum ways of communication in more better way. Blue color theme give it cool, professional and a little bit casual look. This is an unused concept suitable for a blog, social networking site etc.

Another direction. I've been playing with the logo lots and like this new version.

It could be read as '3' 'E', but I don't think thats a problem.

The type 'martin willis' still isn't sitting quite right and I don't know why...

Any direction will be well received.

just a revision of the other. dont know which i like better. suggestions?

Revised personal logo. I can easily replace Graphic Design with Landscapes to fit either need. Comments...

finished piece. i know the GW font looks creepy, but thats what im going for.

Here is a brand new version of the logo project I have done. it is for a fake design company. I have taken into account some of the statements I received and thought it better to just restart.

Any tips will be greatly appreciated.