final piece
g23williams (18 points) | Thu, 2009-11-05 17:17
finished piece. i know the GW font looks creepy, but thats what im going for.
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holy balls. this freaks me out.
awesome!
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Not sure of the connection between your type choices. The scale of the GW is huge compared to your name and what you do. I wish you had taken early advice and went in a new direction.
Hello g23williams,
the last time you posted this logo you said that you knew it was simple but that's what you're going for. This time you're saying that you know it's creepy but that's what you're going for.
So I need you to clarify what it is you want this logo to say about you.
(Don't say 'simple and creepy'!)
I think that using 3 different fonts in a design like this is too many.
If you really want it to appear simple then keep it simple.
If you really want it to be scary then I'm sure you can be scarier than this can't you?
This, as always, is just an opinion but I hope it helps a bit.
If you want to be known as the skateboard dude who can do cool stick figures - congrats. You own that market now.
There's 3 disconnected fonts going on here, why is that? As said before, the mark is FAR too big in relation to your name and "graffix".
Honestly the worst thing about this is that the GW is terribly executed. It looks disjointed and totally makes known of the fact that you haven't had enough practice with the pen tool.
+100
Blown up at that size, all of the flaws of that typeface you chose are amplified. If you insist on using this typeface, you need to take it into Illustrator, Create Outlines, and tame some of those awkward bumps and lumps.
Oh yeah, and the kerning on "Graffix" is atrocious.
And why would you capitalize "Graffix" when "Grant" and "Williams" is not?
I don't know why, but
http://files.dipdive.com/1241805588/mediaItem/7352/15379/20070822.jpg
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I'm not meaning this to offend the person who posted- this is just really funny in general!
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